This is a true story.

One day sam and lily were hiking in the forest. But they didn’t know something was lurking in the tree’s above.

Lily said”Hey!sam do you think something is watching us”                                          “I do have this really strange  feeling” replied sam

Suddenly, something dropped from above it was pink and it looked like a cat .

“OMG!” shouted shouted sam                                                                                                                       “Relax its only a pink cat” said lily                                                                                              “Yes its a pink cat…but i’m afraid its the last one lily” said sam

“We have to keep here a secret or someone might use her for medicine or decoration” said lily

“yes” said sam

The end.

2 Responses to “The last pink cat 100 WC by Mia m”
  1. Niamh says:

    This is a really good story, Mia, but try to include some capital letters. Also, it looks a bit muddled up. Otherwise, this was a very, very good idea. Please comment on my post!! http://2014yr5.leverhouse.net/2014/07/08/the-book-obsessed-best-friend/

  2. Carole (Team 100WC) says:

    Mia I do like the way you started this because it made me curious and want to read on. I can see how you have worked hard to include correctly punctuated speech and I think the layout has just been changed by the computer – that happens sometimes. Remember to use capital letters for names of people.

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